This is a nice account of how Alicia learned how to read, however your resolution feels abrupt. It would be wonderful to see more character development as well a conflict established. We also believe you would benefit from our article on how to build a story arc. We hope this feedback helps! Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.
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I will take your recommendations into account! Thank you very much