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RE: My afternoon fantasy

in The Ink Well6 months ago

This is a nicely written story, @rare-gem. That would be a wonderful dream indeed. You mean you don't have a devoted housekeeper in real life?

Regarding "it was just a dream" endings, we have a suggested article for you: https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/writing-tip-35-dont-use-the-it-was-just-a-dream-escape-hatch

Good luck and keep writing!

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I don't, in African homes, parents believe as a female child you have to do all the works in order to become a good wife when you get married. I will check out the article,thanks