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RE: Personality Swap.

in The Ink Well8 months ago

It's really sad when you learn that a friend is doing something terrible. And it's so hard to know what to do! You decision to promise not to tell, but also make her promise to stop was the perfect answer. Too bad it didn't work!

A few tips for you. One is that "faithful" should actually be "fateful" in this instance. Many people make this mistake. But it is helpful to remember that the expression is about fate and destiny, not about faith or religion.

On a faithful Tuesday during one of our play dates

Secondly, please be sure to read your stories through for errors before posting. There are a few issues, like this one:

“Yes, I have heard.” she respoy in assertion.

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Oh, thank you so much for these corrections. I've learnt a thing or two and I really appreciate.

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