Clever story, @wrestlingdesires! Misunderstandings can be both frightening and hilarious.
We have some feedback for you. Your character descriptions are nice, but here's something to think about. The story is Renee's. We are seeing and experiencing the world through her eyes. And so the description of her sleek hair, beautiful young features, and her long muscular leg are rather out of place. These might be the observations of a man watching her, but she wouldn't make those observations herself.
Check out the article we referenced in the prompt post about writing character descriptions which explains this concept very well.
Thanks so much 🙌 Suggestions like this are exactly what I'm looking for ♥️
Thank you for being open to feedback! You're awesome!