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RE: Her ride or die

in The Ink Well3 years ago (edited)

Your Ink Well story for this week meets the challenge of the prompt very well. This young lady is certainly tempted to do bad things, because she wants something that is obviously out of her reach. She is such an unpleasant person that readers almost wish she would get what she wants: a perfectly dreadful mate.

Your wry humor works well here. Thank you for sharing this with us. Have you commented on the stories of at least two other authors in the community? Thank you!

Note: You probably meant 'battered' instead of 'batteries'.

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Thank you for reading. Yes, I've edited it.