I had to give it an alternate ending. The original story which I wrote about two months ago was terribly long- a five thousand word long story, and a breath taking one.
It didn't end as a dream in the real time line either. T'was full of psychological drama and hallucinations plus some bloody stuffs which wouldn't be allowed here on the inkwell community. I just had to look for the easy way out.
Thanks for the feedback. I sincerely appreciate it.