Thanks so much, I always love your input, and am honored that you took time to give it ♥️ Please please keep it coming 🙏
My original thought about her proving herself, was that by tripping and finding herself at the mercy of a stranger was that she realized that her father was right.
If I get out of here, I'll never ask for more freedom again!" she thought.
I never thought about integrating riding the pony into the story! Do you have any ideas how it could be done, without her disobeying her dad?
Thanks again for your help, and your wonderful comment ♥️