Hi @saminakhanktk, I appreciate your skills. I know you are learning and improving for that reason I have a positive criticism feedback for you. I hope this will help you be better at your skill.
Did you noticed the eye and eyebrow covered with hairs didn't matched with the left side? Why is that? The answer is too simple. You needed to draw eyes and eyebrows first then you can lighten it and draw hairs on right side on top of that. This will give your sketch and much more realistic look.
By judging and comparing from your previous art work, u improved alot. Best wishes for your future in growth in polishing your talent.
Your well-wisher!
Thank you for your kind words and constructive feedback. @dlmmqb
I appreciate your support and guidance in helping me improve my skills.
I will consider your advice for my future sketches and strive to continue growing and learning from you.
Your sincerely!