RE: How embracing a simpler lifestyle brought me peace, gratitude, and a deeper connection to the world around me."

Hi. Thank you for responding to the #KISS prompt. Here are a couple of notes, if I may.

For one thing, I don't feel I learned anything from this post about you or your story. The content feels very general. The whole point in our community is empowering the individual and shining a light on authentic content. So as much as we welcome and encourage engagement, I would strongly recommend steering away from generic content.

Secondly, I would spend a little more time on structure, as several of the sentences here end abruptly and incoherently. It makes it difficult for the reader.

Thanks. :)