I have to go with the closing line...
He pressed down on the cool metal, closed his eyes, and listened.
Thanks for hosting the giveaways, they were a great reminder to catch up on the parts I was behind on. The pacing of the the release schedule felt perfect to me. Admittedly I fell behind now and then 😀 As far as the length of each part goes those were also right on. Long enough to get a flow going, but not so long I couldn't complete it in under 10 minutes.
Thanks again for the giveaways, it has been a fun way to follow along with the story.
Thank you for the detailed feedback :)