Tears ran down her face now, and the temperature kept falling. The panic in the air around him started to thin out, diluting as she cried, becoming something caught between sorrow and anxiety.
As for feedback;
I hate having to wait haha so I preferred to wait for your weekly ping make myself some time and read all new chapters all at once.
Every part is so well written that each and every one of them let me hungry for more, so in that sense, more length is welcome so that we can have a few more minutes of joy. I even kept a tab opened to find easily on my phone.
Definitely the giveaway inspired me. In fact, at the beggining I tried to cheat and read only one part just to participate ๐
but then I just couldn't help myself, I loved it.
Hope to read more from you soon!
Haha oh wow! That is high praise :) ~ thank you for sharing this and your feedback.
Also if you didn't notice yet, you're a Giveaway #5 winner! I know you're not a bot so I'll send your prizes and receipts over shortly (will edit this comment w/ receipts) ~ EDIT: I actually included the receipts in another comment.
No way! Yesterday and today I've been looking for that post in your profile but couldn't find it! I'll look for it again now
Great news ๐
-Already looked and couldnt find the post announcing winners in your profile! Please, share that link ๐ฌ