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RE: Ally – New Fiction for Scholar and Scribe

You reap what you sow. Adam had no idea the emotions he loosed and set into play when he bullied Ally. That's the thing about harassing someone. You never know their state of mind. The thing is that Adam probably was in shock, having forgotten what he did to Ally and how he made her feel.

Thanks for sharing. Crisp and clear from start to finish the intent and feelings behind the act. A gripping story that definitely would do King justice.

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Thank you for reading and taking time with my story. To call it a 'gripping story that would do King justice' is high praise in my book. Your point about Adam having forgotten what he did to Ally is an interesting one. It went beyond the scope of this piece to really delve into his state of mind, but it seems entirely plausible that the incident was much less important to him than it was to Ally.

Just my take on it from their brief encounter as though he was surprised by her attack. Could have been he had no time to question it as he was engrossed in the game. Thanks for pointing that out. It's been my experience with bullies that the inflict, then move on to the next victim, often not remembering the fallout left behind.

Thanks for your engagement. Take care.

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