Me too. And I know about even very smart people with Literary degrees that are doing that. At first I was telling them, but now I prefer just to watch how they don't do as well online as they should.
That kind of long paragraphs are ok in novels or even in technical books, but are not working in the online world.
Good point. I've been trying to remind myself not to be so wordy for a long time. It took me far longer than it should to realize that people read differently online.