If you're using a translator for these comments, I'd say it does a pretty good job!
I will put your name down, but let me know if you need to drop out (there will be no hard feelings 😉). Also we should think about what community to post in. If there is a good Italian language community that would appreciate hearing about the story then that would be great!
Nope, for comments and short writings I don't use a translator, only my awesome (sarcasm over 9,000!) english skills ahahah
A good italian community is Olio di Balena: it could be of your interest? The only downside is that, usually, the majority of us, italians, isn't very good when it comes to speak and read foreign languages.. so there's a good chance that, even if they find my review (if I will be able to write it) interesting, then they won't be able to follow your novel, as your english is way above italian-school level
I'm willing to take that chance! Let's go with Olio di Balena so you can write the main review in Italian. You never know, in the future it could be very useful in helping me reach an international market!