Hello, my new friend @flashfiction.
I'm here today, reading your post, because you were kind enough to take the time to read my recent story "Pulling Strings" and to comment on it.
I find myself moved by your story, and hoping with all my heart that you are truly the one who your story portrays.
In order to find out, I have Followed you and Re-Steemed your story.
I observe that your English is remarkably good for someone who evidently is an "English as Second Language" speaker. Even so, it could be improved, and if you are who you seem to be, I suspect that you would like nothing better.
Therefore, I strongly encourage you to join The Writers' Block and to bring your work there for critique and comment. I know you will not be disappointed.
Welcome to Steemit! I wish for you that you'll find all your hopes, and more, granted here.
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THANK YOU SO MUCH. You are right, my english is not my first language and it is still somewhat difficult (And scary) for me to write long form using it. I will join the site you kindly share with me, and try to use it for my future short stories, once i translate them to english.
You are already doing very well, my friend. I know that as time goes on you will only do better. I see that @mitneb has already provided you with some excellent editing advice. I'm also happy to see that you plan to apply it. I'll just mention that you need to edit soon, because after a week, Steemit locks you out from editing your work.
Already corrected it. :) Thank you again, you people are great.
Excellent, my friend, excellent! :D