You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
When the wife's of all the construction workers come in looking for their paychecks early because they need to feed their kids, seeing that you're alone, you'll have the heart to tell them no because your a bitter man.It should be you're a instead of your a.
Why you!!
lol tells life story * you have minor grammatical mistake *
lol, I got a laugh out of it. Sometimes if you don't laugh, you cry.
You missed one grammernazi
Wife's should be wives