Oh, by the way - you might want to add a comma after brother before son in the opening line. It's not your brother son, it's your brother, son. That sentence was both logical and ill (ogical)
Oh, by the way - you might want to add a comma after brother before son in the opening line. It's not your brother son, it's your brother, son. That sentence was both logical and ill (ogical)
Yes indeed, thank you. I have now updated it!