Beautiful poem! I really enjoyed this piece, as it has a hypnotising nature to it. I felt like I was there, floating in this sea, as I read this piece. Your use of adjectives is very effective and aids immensely in creating powerful and vivid imagery. Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
Thanks a lot. i'll be sure to check out your page