A Cold Summer Night

in #life7 years ago (edited)

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It’s a cold summer night, adorned by an air of serenity, the scenery is peaceful but almost lonely. As I stare into the starry night sky, I am filled with a sense of nostalgia, a longing to return home. I am haunted by phantom memories I can barely recall. They linger on the very edge of my perception, fragments of a forgotten past, as I reach out they slip from my grasp. I see the lightening in the distance, its most elegant patterns grace the sky, so powerful yet so delicate. Pregnant clouds fill my view like ornate curtains closing on a stage performance. Loud sonorous voices fill the air, as giants in converse discussing my fate. The rain pours, my senses masked by the torrent, I close my eyes and fall into myself floating away in a sea of consciousness.

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What a beautiful post! @manofmiracles It felt so real, like i was the one in the cold summer night. Great work as always, you deserve a million upvotes and more!

ohh what a beautiful poem buddy . you just made me fill poem and i was thinking that the word "I" was described for me...have a goodf day

Beautiful poem! I really enjoyed this piece, as it has a hypnotising nature to it. I felt like I was there, floating in this sea, as I read this piece. Your use of adjectives is very effective and aids immensely in creating powerful and vivid imagery. Well done, and thank you for sharing!

PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)

Thanks a lot. i'll be sure to check out your page

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