Nice one @jacobt. If I may be somewhat critical but not in a negative way? The last 2 lines needs 2 more lines to make it a 4 line stanza. Maybe the last line could be something like....Hopefully your soul cannot be bought. :)
Nice one @jacobt. If I may be somewhat critical but not in a negative way? The last 2 lines needs 2 more lines to make it a 4 line stanza. Maybe the last line could be something like....Hopefully your soul cannot be bought. :)
Yea, true. I honestly did that on purpose though. I felt it was more powerful. Additionally, I've never really respected poetic rules :/