It's fun to enjoy. You tell a story with great ability. Lots of interesting things and human values.
I really like this part and the cover is very nice with a dotted mark... after all...
Jaffers came bustling back in with an armful of supplies. The smile fell from his face.
Oh bugger, look at all this blood? And look at him, Is he dead? What the heck happened?
I took my pipe out of my mouth and beamed up at him from my chair beside the dead cyclist.
I have no idea old chap and if I did I absolutely couldn't say, after all... (A meaningful dot in my head :-)
I am glad you like that bit :O)