Hey man, it's decent subject matter, but horribly written. Proof-read it and check out Grammar girl or something similar to learn about comma usage and the correct form of "where vs were" and little things like that.
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Yea!!! Get’em... terrible writing and grammar! This is theeee “Bully the writer” thread right?!?! Oh shit... hope you are ok w my punctuation.
yeah sorry about that, I used to have a grammar plugin before, but have not been able to use it since my
computer broke down.