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Just being honest... not a huge fan of the first several measures. It took forever to get into a good beat and I was kinda done listen well before measure 40. I liked some of the beats after that but the cymbal was too repetitive without reason, it seemed to me, and should have some more variation. I've made some beats before and have seen how mathematical it is. You have some good symmetry in there, but the measures don't all work well together in my opinion.

What program are you using to write this? I don't want to discourage you... you have potential... then again, others may be fully in love with this, as all music attracts different tastes.