RE: Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!

[gentleshaid]

Here is my humble submission on Dragonereum review

https://steemit.com/dragonereum/@gentleshaid/dragonereum-be-the-targaryen-in-charge-of-your-dragons

And herein lies my twitter share

Comments

[mids106]

Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

• Good story telling, great mix of supporting pictures images and content.
• In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. I would love to read more why you like this game!
• I’d like to see some more in-game screenshots to get a feeling for the gameplay.
• Before tweeting edit the title; no need to add " - Steemit". With too many tags, it will quickly look like spam.
• I am not a fan of a quick-links section, personally I prefer them to be part of the story.
• Maybe you can tell us more about the dragons that you hatched?

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🥚🥚🥚

[gentleshaid]

Thanks for the feedback. This is actually my first time of reviewing a game and your feedback would be extremely useful for my future tasks.