Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Great introduction and story, but mentioning Oracle-D is a big no-no for their tasks!
After the embedded gameplay trailer video, your article falls a bit apart. It feels rushed and there is no conclusion. I would love to read how your story really ends :)
In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing.
I get the feeling that you are trying to be too complex with your language, don't say "for your perusal" in a game review.
The chosen screenshots are a bit chaotic, different sizes and styles. Not well mixed with the story.
Title, category and tags are okay.
I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article.
Tweet has too many tags, looks like spam.
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Thanks for the review. I would be sure to implement the points you dropped in my next review.
About the tags, it was suggested in the guideline post, but I would cut it down in my next post.
Many thanks
Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: ⭐⭐⭐
Thanks for the review. I would be sure to implement the points you dropped in my next review.
About the tags, it was suggested in the guideline post, but I would cut it down in my next post.
Many thanks