MY SUPER HERO
I Remember years ago
I seek a Super Hero
didn't know Where to start
but i knew I wanted one with a good heart
time has changed years have past
and my super hero i found at-last
thought me everything and all i know
the man is my hero
and all this time i didnt see
my father was the one i seek
another short poem straight from the heart hope you all read it and let me no what you think about it and upvote will be much appreciated thank you...
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thank you @untapentuoreja
Lucky you @danimal you still have your father as your super hero, such a nice poem
sorry to hear @aphrodite24 thank you i wanted to do longer but id go on all day haha
Well I think it’s just enough though 😁😁
thank you means alot 😁
Ayyyeeeee.... you check the new stuff?
Hi whats up bro ya no problem checking it now :)
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It's very touching you writing straight from your heart... I also write poems but in my mothertounge...
thank you again i have a lot to share just couldn't find away to express all the feelings trapped inside of me then i found poetry :p ya great i would love to see some of your poems
I understand your point. It's hard to express thoughts you have in your head. That's why poetry is kind of auto-therapy for me... ;-) I may try to translate some of them in english.
ya very hard sometimes but then again when i listen to the right music it brings back the good and the bad memories back so its kinda good because i can put my love and hate in my poetry. Really i hope you do would really love to hear one of your poems
I promice I would try to do my best. Yes, it's good and helpful to write downn your strong feelings - bad or good. Especially most of us - XXIc people - have problems with expressing their feelings.
great thanks Im sure you'll do great. ya it really helps a lot i just wish i could put everything into one poem it can be hard at times. I can only express mine true text haha :P
Thanks ;) I'm really looking forward for your next text :D
Nothing is more special in this world we live in than your family. Great job bro. 👍 keep it up.
so true thanks bro i will do
Bro you on a grind huh?
I see you. That’s wasup. I’m doing the same thing. I’m trying to get as many followers as possible. But only under one condition, they have to genuinely like my music. Gotta start somewhere right.
whats the grind and ya everyone got to start from some where poetry isnt my only talent i do what i love and what i like
grind as in work just checked you out on dtube some good stuff bro upvotted and followed hope you do the same in return
Yea. I grind as In working. Your putting in that work to built a following. I can respect that.
ya thats good bro the video you have on dtube is very good like professional good keep it up bro some good shit
I upvoted and followed you. Hope you will do the same :)
thanks just upvoted and followed you
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Well I got to tell man that is the way to go. Just let it all flow naturally and let it out. It becomes more easily and more fluent with time you'll see. I am happy to support your efforts. Way to go. Keep up the good work.
thank you @angelveselinov means alot thanks for the support ya im happy to learn more and make myself as best as i can be
You did justice to it and I felt very emotional and attached, as I can relate to it
thank you means alot im glad it made you feel that way and im happy i can express what im feeling in poetry
this is a very true poem.. unless your dad isn't a hero. OOPS.
well my dad is and i will be releasing one about my mother soon hope you enjoy that one
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