Absolutely loved it, the way that it didn't followed any of those stereotypical poetry rules and regulations they teach you on day1 yet still sings through the background even after you completed reading is flawless.
I myself just recently started writing some poems, no where near as good as you though.
Do comment on my poetry i have posted here ,if you got some extra sec. Thanks
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Thanks. It really means a lot to me. I'm happy you enjoyed it and found the rhyme scale to be interesting. Lyrics are quite enjoyable to write and essentially its poetry made specifically for the microphone. Wordplay is fun, using alliteration and not getting into a standard rhythm seem to make ideas come to life more.. I will definitely check out your poetry and give you feedback on it. Thanks again for dropping by.
My pleasure