RUMI REMIX

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

I am a sculptor, a molder of form.

In every moment I shape an idol.

For the love reigns in stones

With the back pushed towards the lover

But then, in front of you, I melt them down

I can rouse a hundred forms

and fill them with spirit,

But help me love on the shores of Nile

I know the secrets of love but,

but when I look into your face,

I want to throw them in the fire.

My souls spills into yours and is blended.

Because my soul has absorbed your fragrance,

I cherish it.

Every drop of blood I spill

informs the earth,

I merge with my Beloved

when I participate in love.

In this house of mud and water,

my heart has fallen to ruins.

Enter this house, my Love, or let me leave.

@d-pend @terrycraft @aggroed

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In line 8, did you mean 'soul' instead of "souls"? That's the only correction I'd make. A good poem nonetheless.

Actually it depicts the individuality....by this I actually mean that my soul is broken into pieces .....The soul breaks when you are at the peak of LOVE.....and that what I m trying to visualize...

SOULS

Oh I see. It just confused me with "souls spills". Maybe 'souls spill' would read better. Anyway, best to you.☺

Is this a song already available over internet or you written this.👍


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