The poem is written in Persian
And so there are problems in translation
But the big difference is possible , cause of differences in cultures,Differences in thoughts.
So
You may not really understand something or part of it
But you will understand the whole
As far as I could have changed the vocabulary
To prevent damage to the original poem
at the end..
Thank you very much for your beautiful and useful comment
And I'm glad you enjoyed my poetry
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I think you'd better write your poems in English from the scratch...you know?
I think it'll make more sense for yourself while writing...and this way you avoid misunderstandings... I think in some cases, English is more sophisticated to use for a short poem or writing...
I really need you to check my two poems and write your opinions... It'll be appreciated...Thanks...
surly ... thanks