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RE: the Uninhabitable [Day 5]

in #poetry7 years ago

I think I have a foot in two worlds, not just in this, but in many of my experiences that have built the foundation of my identity. sometimes it deceives me and I think I've moved on from one thing or another, but the world always seems to bring me back.

and I spend so much time bothering with the dialog, more than on anything else, and am usually never satisfied. More than anything, I need to spend some more time actively and mindfully reading poems with dialog, which is not something I have sought out enough of.

Yeah, there might be some things I want to salvage from this to write a more pointed piece, I'll take some time with it on the backend of the 100 days, but not a priority, this one. Never quite figured out how to take my outline and make it tangible.

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You know, I thought of asking you, since you're so much more widely-read than me when it comes to poetry. Are there any good examples of poems with dialogue you can think of? If so, I'd love it if you shared.

As to the other thing, I don't believe we can truly "move on" past things, so long we remember them. And that is what makes us us. This is also related to why I believe forgiveness is impossible, hue.