Excellent poem with full of imagery about the soul, which is the main focus of all human being. We, human being, have become so cruel, unkind, immoral and inhuman because we have forgotten our soul. We are body conscious, outer focus and more materialistic, so there are conflicts in the community and suffering of the human being across the globe. People pride for post and power, not humanly nature of kindness, compassion, cooperation and giving to charity. Great to read your poem which I hope will inspire all of us to be good and positive for the betterment of mankind.
I'm really touched by your insight, I love it :D