500!!! Poem / Soul Inside

in #poetry7 years ago

500 WOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

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Thank you to all my amazing followers that leave me with a nice upvote and some breathe-taking comments, you all make my days and I hope that you stick around for more content.

I am glad that I have been able to grow so quickly over the past couple of months and that I have had such wonderful people give me advice and inspire me to continue on!

The Soul Inside

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T he mass that has gathered within me
H as started to awaken like blossoms on a cherry tree
E every single one insignificant, but together make the plant look magnificent

S omewhere in this body of mine
O ut in the vastness that isn't constrained by time
U nmistakably their is a soul
L ost in my eternal black hole

I nside where It is believed to be
N othing except hollowness. It's empty
S imply looking in the right place
I nside the discombobulated space
D ividing all the mess
E very person harbors a soul in their deepest depths

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By Ethan
2017/07/26

DISCLAIMER: Gingers are some of my favorite people, please don't take this joke offensively, it was the only this picture that was sort of what I was looking for.

Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed! If you did and want to hear more you can follow me here ^-^ <(^~^<)

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Inspiring read... Thanks for sharing!

Obligatory terrifying Carrot Top pic. Better sleep with one eye open. j/k
Excellent poem!

XD

My vote isnt worth much but... :)

Hey @xxsenpaixsamaxx, that means a lot. I've spent a lot of my voting power on audience but do understand your reservations with using it on lower tier content. I imagine a lot of audience comments fall into this realm. My idea is to solve this problem with a creation of a nanoupvotebot that will accept infinitesimally small amounts of Steem or SBD and provide a "nano" upvote indicating the user that it is from in a following comment. The idea just dawned on me so will need to really consider all the implications and if it is even possible for that matter. I plan on creating a Linux VM and start toying around with the Steemit API. The breadth of my scripting knowledge happens to be in Microsoft operating systems but how hard could it be?

The way you put all the items in this post show your artistic skills. Everything looks at its place. When things are on their right place, they look beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed this post so I could not resist upvoting it. Keep posting the great posts!

Thanks mate :) I'm glad it flowed!

super good head , nice article

You've got soul, Ethan!

Lovely piece. I'm inspired by this, and your writing style too. Nice one.

It's my pleasure :)

Uw @xxsenpaixsam
Kip doin ur best

Congratulations, and others will be following you because you focus on quality, not quantity :)

Thank you ☺

Very nice , i followed for more , keep up the good works

Upvoted and Resteemed.

I very much like this style of writing a phrase downwards,
and expanding the poem outwards.

Do you mind if I write my own in this style?
I have been looking for inspiration and style.

Good work btw. Awesome poem.

I don't mind, I'm pretty sure I am not the first to write in this fashion ;)

Hi Ethan! As always, you somehow reach deep inside you and pull out a wonderful creative piece of expression. Your poem made me ponder what is soul. To me it is our essence of being, it drives us up a path in life, it makes us feel, it gives us the foundation on which to make choices, it gives us meaning. It is invisible yet powerful. It is the sum of our collective consciousness. We all have it. but some are more in tune to it than others. Thank-you for your thought provoking poem. :)

It is my pleasure, I like abstract topics like souls, there is a lot that we don't know and a very limited amount we can guess and that's what makes it interesting :)

Your poetry skill is simply amazing like your writing style voted & followed wish you the same.check my latest post on poetry hope you like it...💞

Thank you, I will check it out :)

This poem will reach inside your soul
And never let go,
Like a hand that you know,
Intimately so.
soul speak great post

Thanks you ☺

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Excellent poem with full of imagery about the soul, which is the main focus of all human being. We, human being, have become so cruel, unkind, immoral and inhuman because we have forgotten our soul. We are body conscious, outer focus and more materialistic, so there are conflicts in the community and suffering of the human being across the globe. People pride for post and power, not humanly nature of kindness, compassion, cooperation and giving to charity. Great to read your poem which I hope will inspire all of us to be good and positive for the betterment of mankind.

I'm really touched by your insight, I love it :D

You put your soul into my hands;) haha congrats for the followers:) keep on shinning! xoxo

Thank you!! xoxo