Meditation (original poetry)

in #poetry7 years ago

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The timelines are like spider's webs weaving and unraveling;

All the places here to there with no need for traveling.

Energy transitions and takes on many different forms;

Order looks like chaos when society has endless norms.

The frequencies are shifting and I feel them in my head;

I'd rather be dying to live than trying to live when I'm dead.

Illusions come and go like the thought forms that they are,

we may be ghosts in a shell or just some spirits in a bar.

Will it even matter when we make it to the end,

or will we still be bickering with enemy and friend

The contrast is the only context that I seem to find

when I'm dwelling in these lonely recesses of my mind.


Thanks to @amanardis for the awesome gif.

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I like the art, I like the rhymes! I always rhyme when I write poetry, it’s embarassing. Why does it seem cooler when you do It? Lol

I possibly missed the meditative hook and the philosophical teachings, too distracted by the kaleidoscope of colors!

I don't think it hurts to rhyme,
At least not some of the time.

Glad you think that’s so
Will try and have a go!

(Or maybe not 😂)

Meditation, Contemplations and ponderings, thanks for sharing @clayboyn.

Nice flow, Clayboyn — philosophical ponderings woven into rhymes. I like.... ⭐️

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Awesome poem