I like the art, I like the rhymes! I always rhyme when I write poetry, it’s embarassing. Why does it seem cooler when you do It? Lol
I possibly missed the meditative hook and the philosophical teachings, too distracted by the kaleidoscope of colors!
I don't think it hurts to rhyme,
At least not some of the time.
Glad you think that’s so
Will try and have a go!
(Or maybe not 😂)