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RE: Meditation (original poetry)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

I like the art, I like the rhymes! I always rhyme when I write poetry, it’s embarassing. Why does it seem cooler when you do It? Lol

I possibly missed the meditative hook and the philosophical teachings, too distracted by the kaleidoscope of colors!

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I don't think it hurts to rhyme,
At least not some of the time.

Glad you think that’s so
Will try and have a go!

(Or maybe not 😂)