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RE: Red and Gold

in #poetry7 years ago

Firstly, I LOVE the picture. It reminds me of a good cry and my mascara smudging the side of my face. (Yes you can use that line).

You rhymed in this one!! Whaaaaat????

I can hear the beating of the rain, the pervasive sound it makes with the words you use. And the silent rescue of the red and gold.

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Hi @countrygirl sounds like you are also an expert poet?

haha...no, no. I like to understand and observe things. I'm a reader, not a writer. I wish I were one though :)

What do you like to read?

You know redheads have both red and gold in their hair, so the window square is symbolic of his Love :)

I missed the window symbolism but yes, I know about gingers. Hello. :)

I was just being subtle :)

you were :) I know. And I was being obvious. And silly.

I know that :)

"You rhymed in this one!! Whaaaaat????"

Hahahahahahaha! Yes, truly out of character... but perfectly placed!

I have a tendency to point out the obvious.....hahahaha.....he's like Matlock and knows the answers to everything!