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in #poetry7 years ago

Really beautiful metaphors, John...

Drawing from my own experience of observing the world, your words rekindled those vivid visualizations of light and color and motion the LORD has designed into creation.

And then tying them into the beautiful mystery of a woman with her moods and subtly but wonderfully deceptive pre-responses... :D

Grand! Well done!

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a beautifully crafted response, my friend - of course it's God who's always previous, but sometimes I use poetic license and apply the same to demigoddesses :)