I have neglected myself
Since I started to love you.
Because my world,
and my heart revolves around you.
I find it difficult
Because you love us both.
You will not hear
any complaint from my lips.
Because of love, I learned to endure.
Because of love, I gave it completely.
My heart is not hoping
anymore for love returned.
Because of love I gave in to your whims.
Because of love,
my heart is crying now.
Good friends, I will not listen to all your advice.
I shall follow my heart...
Because I love her completely.
"I came to rise as wounded dolphin."
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Hey, thanks a lot! I am not posting poems usually but sometimes
they spark out of my mind.
So bittersweet. I really like it!
Thank you!
nice poem my friend, but i guess heart is a male not a female so
it should be like that because i love him completely and you are looking discouraged to me my friend especially with these words.
i think we should never leave the hand of hope because hope is the start of every success.
You have a good eye, my friend. I meant the narrator as part of a love triangle or something like that...
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Nothing else matters.Love is pizza and you have a good appetite @darthnava
This poem reminds of the song Saving All My Love for You. Ha ha
Nice. Thank you.
you feel and do this when you are in true love.
Wow...nice and lovely poem...
Upvoted...
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Lovely Poem.
That's a great poem i have read in recent times :)
beautiful dil!
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