On Top Of Love

[dobartim]

• We dream of freedom on the bed of habits, success is a series of disciplined steps in accordance with values. You're the queen of emotion that takes the best days out of the ocean of enthusiasm. Slight excitement rules with the rules of life, you have changed the color of the mystery.

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• We walk through the future on the waves of digital energy, opening the door of challenges through the fiery mirror of the past. Orchards pass through a crisis of false messages, we read the works of their ancestors from the wonders of the subconscious.

• The beauty of the mind saves the mistake of youth, conquering time with new dimensions of scientific skill. Your steps are exciting me in the light moon, you are the goal of my goals above the limits of thought. Wet silence dries the lips on icy fire, I miss the sound of the wind in your hair.

• Look at the smile above the rain, preserve the deep emotions of love on the piano surprise. Above the top you exist, a princess in a white light that predates the love magic of pure manners. A special occasion of honor creates a new horizon of tenderness, you are a particular virtue above the material senses.

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• Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Comments

[rosestar]

"Success is a series of disciplined steps in accordance to value"

• I agree to this,most times people need to be and go through disciplines to get to their success but it really shouldn't be too much so that it can be bearable as well.
  sometimes tenderness is silence
  sometimes on cannot clearify a false message with hear both parts
  sometimes magical moments are all one needs
  Be it reality or illusional
• i like your poetry and i read many of them,i like the way you set out your words as well, they're poetically constructed that someone have to read through severally to understand and that's the beauty.
  Though i want to ask a question what does "you're a particular above the material senses" mean?

[dobartim]

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[gumegxgolgom]

I really like your poetry.

Your inspired me
One Team
One Family
We Win Together
Stay Blessed And Steem On !! Thank @dobartim

[dobartim]

See you on top

[gumegxgolgom]

Thanks @dobartim

[tomilolafadipe]

Yet another morning masterpiece.
I have come for the shot. The words are piercing through every barrier.
We win together!

[dobartim]

Have a nice and successful day

[tusharraina23]

Love and happiness are 2 different emotions yet so interlinked. When we are happy we love the moment, when we are in love we are happy.
Emotions are so complex that a normal human being cannot understand that. Thanks for giving us your time and efforts.Good morning sir @dobartim, beautiful lines, with a lot of emotions. This is your wisdom and motivation you want to spread among all. So that we all can learn from your life experiences.

We win only Together
Steemschools foreverI love your morning energy, you are so disciplined and hard working I appreciate your work sir @dobartim.

[dobartim]

See you on the top

[adeniyi]

I woke up this morning searching for your post..your poetic creativity has become an addiction to me, its like a daily habit.

[dobartim]

Success depends on daily habits

[hiranur]

Fantasztikus! @dobartim

[dobartim]

Thanks, see you in live class

[fackrurrazi]

incredible works of great poetry writing, keep on step @ dobartin, this can be our motivation in the work.

[dobartim]

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[rokhani]

always a nice post
I comment with this

when you put your face up to the sky
you see clouds and sunshine cross each other
form a straight line toward the earth
stabbing through the crevices of the trees
that's the path you're thirsting for
not easy to hit the virgin forest
full of thistles and thorns
to reach the awen in the sky
to achieve true success

[dobartim]

See you on the top, keep going

[isramulya]

Greeat post, so amazing
Visit my blug and flbck me please

[dobartim]

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[aplausos]

The science related to love, an optimal relationship science as reality and love as an ethereal feeling but is only shown with tangible things as in science, is shown through physical approach, caresses, kisses which relates it directly with the sciences and their search for the real delo truthful, greetings

[dobartim]

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[isran]

Wow! I can’t watching, that’s beautiful

[dobartim]

Have a nice and successful day

[isran]

Thank you dear brother

[caspersteem]

Emizing image

[dobartim]

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[caspersteem]

thank you too @dobartim , please guidance and upvote its for @caspersteem karna masi baby in steemit thanks

[titufaz]

Really nice poetry. Best of luck @dobartim

[titufaz]

Your have done world class level work. keep going.