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RE: On Top Of Love

in #poetry7 years ago

always a nice post
I comment with this

when you put your face up to the sky
you see clouds and sunshine cross each other
form a straight line toward the earth
stabbing through the crevices of the trees
that's the path you're thirsting for
not easy to hit the virgin forest
full of thistles and thorns
to reach the awen in the sky
to achieve true success

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See you on the top, keep going