Life is a challenge with wonderful colors, we run snow through the fire gates. We are lions, we are a sandy storm that disappears in the age of eternity. We look at the stars in the perfect resonance of the cosmic power, we are sewing love in the hands of the truth that leads us through various ways.
Source - wallpapers13.com/beautiful-dreaming-fantasy-girl-artwork-wallpaper-2/We look at victories in every defeat, we are unbeatable in the spirit of changing the future destiny. I tried with the challenges, that I was my maxim - I fell. I cried over my defeats until I realized that every defeat was my new experience that led me to victory.
We are the truth in false clouds, our path is special and unrepeatable in pure intentions of love. Wake up dormant power, you are a mysticism that drives all my victories in the ocean of challenges - I love you in the perfect form of new movements on the wall of spiritual art.
Change tears in a smile, each tear is a new victory on the way to the top.
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- Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Wow... Beautiful poetry here @dobartim. Straight from the heart, this sure captivated me.
Thank you very much
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We should look at defeats as means of conquering another time. Nice poem boss
I am your friend, not boss
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I didn't realize that was original until I read all the way to the bottom. I'm impressed because the way you used your words provoked new thoughts in me as a read. I don't read much poetry so this was a treat.
Thank you for nice words
Hi! @dobartim! Just as my name implies, I say "You're Welcome" to unrequited thank you comments. So, even if they didn't respond for whatever reason, I wanted to say you're welcome. :) This comment was identified using a SteemData MongoDb query. :)
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The words of this poetry strongly conveys the message of not giving up inspite of challenges. A winning spirit never throw in the towel. Thanks @dobartim
Make one poetry, I wan't to see your spirit
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Wow!
Words straight from the soul.
This struck me...
Same here dear @gee1. This part got me
Thank you for nice comment
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What I am just trying to do is just to use his content medium to invite people to check my own post at my blog. I never knew this is a spam
Agreed, our mistakes are what makes us because we won't change otherwise. Nicely written and hope for more.
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Wow😍😍😍💗✔
If you are not ready for the challenge, then forget the victory. If you admire people of great achievement, you cant afford to be lazy. Forget about shielding tears for the pain. They are part of the victory
Thanks for the reminder
Excellent comment, keep going
such a great piece @dobartim, i had to spend some time to go over and over the post again and again. Such an awakening post. i mean, as i kept reading, i started seeing myself ready to face what have been scared of in the past years.
i have just have to follow you,i know there is much more treasure of such words in your mind.
I salute "The Boss"
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Your poetry is simply awesome, there are no words to describe it, out of them I loved to read this one most
We are the truth in false clouds, our path is special and unrepeatable in pure intentions of love. Wake up dormant power, you are a mysticism that drives all my victories in the ocean of challenges - I love you in the perfect form of new movements on the wall of spiritual art. Keep sharing such posts, thankyou
You are welcome
Completely my pleasure
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"Change tears in a smile, each tear is a new victory on the way to the top" if you want to achieve something try to be tough on the inside, then only one can change tears into smile, in order to be successful you need to shed tears and that results in victory... Nice poetic sense
Thank you very much
Hi! @dobartim! Just as my name implies, I say "You're Welcome" to unrequited thank you comments. So, even if they didn't respond for whatever reason, I wanted to take this opportunity to say that you're welcome!. As an added bonus, I will be visiting you blog to find a post to resteem just because! :) Cheers!
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Wow. 😍😍😍💗
Have the courage to accept that you’re not perfect, nothing is and no one is!
amazing poetry indeed
Thanks
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Nice poetry👌👌
Thanks
wow good photo and writing. thank you bro
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Very good poems and can give more motivation for me in a state of sad or happy, your poetry can give new spirit for me, thanks you very much @dobartim. Success always for you 😊
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The very good writen
Thanks
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A well written poem... Love this
Thanks for making morning..
My spirit has been elated
Make one poetry
YES I CAN
On the boulevard of wisdom I stand
Gazing to the cloud and I ask what does the future hold for me?
The sun replied "you are the doctor to be"
The moon replied " you are the potential leader in making"
The angels whispered to my ear "work hard and you'll see"
My heart wondered around the pedestal of the great and there I found solace and my soul said "you will be greater than these greats "
Oh my heart, has found peace, I sing the song of victory for my future is bright.
Still pondering on how, when and it's gonna happen and the gentle breeze of the air whispered to me, be optimistic, persevering, undeterred and impossibilities will bow at your risings
Now and yes I know I can make it!
Thanks my star 🌟 .....the future is bright 🔆
Written by @cyprianj
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Wow greate article!
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Nice. I want reading all post what your writed. Thanks for this poetry Mr. @dorbatim
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We should stand out, defend our race, be a victor every time have confidence, courage face every strugle
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It's great to read your post.Thanks for shairing a nice poem.life is better when we are not cry.
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Nice. You have me thinking of a poem I wrote in primary school titled hobbies. Goes a lil something like this..
Hobbies.
Skateboarding is what I do best
And every day I put it to the test.
Down the town center I fly
Watching faces as I go by
I give people races all of the time
And when I stop I get covered in grime..
Yes Jeffery Sleeman is my name
And skateboarding is my game.
Yeww.
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This was enough to strengthen me and make me smile again. Just came out of writing an examination I was so prepared for but imagine my surprise when I forgot half of what I studied for.
I had to write it all from my intuition. Thanks for always pushing me to get better through your poems.
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Its really wonderful poetry thanks
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excellent writing, words that ride powerful on the truth and humid with the syrup of light ;-)
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Yea....mistakes can be a part of humane life ........ But how one relate to it is what makes one to be above such or any other challenges......... Well composed. Yes winning together is d code.
YES I CAN
On the boulevard of wisdom I stand
Gazing to the cloud and I ask what does the future hold for me?
The sun replied "you are the doctor to be"
The moon replied " you are the potential leader in making"
The angels whispered to my ear "work hard and you'll see"
My heart wondered around the pedestal of the great and there I found solace and my soul said "you will be greater than these greats "
Oh my heart, has found peace, I sing the song of victory for my future is bright.
Still pondering on how, when and it's gonna happen and the gentle breeze of the air whispered to me, be optimistic, persevering, undeterred and impossibilities will bow at your risings
Now and yes I know I can make it!
Thanks my star 🌟 .....the future is bright 🔆
Written by @cyprianj
Nicely done.
I had a mate that loved to write poetry. I was writing music and playing a lot of live gigs.
So I took one of his poems and owrked it into one of the songs. I loved the lyrics. I must pull that out and go through it again.
It seems you use your poetry to get above the difficulties...to rise again...to buoy yourself up and re-energize. That's what this stuff can do!
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words of wisdom...
Hey man! I really like your stuff. I don't know if you've experimented with different forms/structures before, but I think you could definitely have some fun with line breaks. For example:
"We are the truth
in false clouds,
our path is special and
unrepeatable in pure intentions
of love.
Wake up dormant power,
you are a mysticism that
drives all my victories
in the ocean of challenges -
I love you
in the perfect form
of new movements
on the wall of spiritual art."
If you want to, play around with it a little. If not, I completely understand. I just like to play with line breaks because they can sometimes create double meanings or just enhance the flow of the poem. A sort of stream of consciousness effect.
Regardless, it's really good stuff and I look forward to reading more of your work!
-Lukas Wendell Hughes
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Great way to express and share yourself!