Very well written and delicate poem. I enjoyed the balance in the stanzas too, congrats!
Today I wore on my face a @mariannewest mask and - trying to reproduce her charming voice - I'm happy to proclaim that on this weekend you have the following options!
You have the choice of a single prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-1-6-2018-single-prompt-option
Or you can get adventurous and weave three 5minute freewrites into one story starting with this prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-1-6-2018-part-1-the-first-sentence
Hi @f3nix. Thanks for your lovely comment and visit. I am guessing you're one of the fantastic peeps who are helping @mariannewest to keep the 5 min freewrite rollercoaster powering along while she has a well earned break. Well done! I will be doing the 3 prompt free write today 🙂
Hi @raj808, you guessed right (for the peep part, for the fantastic I'm working on it). I saw you several times but never really focused on your blog so far. It happens due to the fact that this great community is growing in number at a high pace. I'm glad I'll do this Saturday review for Marianne because I had the chance of discovering interesting people like you. I followed you and will check your fine poetry again :-)