Maybe he’s waiting for the perfect time
Maybe she’s sick of waiting
But what if the perfect time never comes
What if two lost souls searching for love
Are waiting forever
When love is the only thing that could save them
Two lost souls that have been through hell on Earth
Who have tasted real pain with their mouths full of hate
When misery is the normal state of mind
If love can’t save them
Nothing can
Then they’re doomed to darkness
She thought she was kind of ready for him
But he kept fighting against it
Too afraid to let her come close
When their eyes met there was no doubt
Only pure love and magic
Is fear stronger than love?
But if it’s written in the stars
It will be
Someday, somewhere, somehow
She must trust in that
Now
Relax and let go
i can feel the emotion put into this piece. you write a about scenario many have been through and will go through. hopefully all can find the strength to relax and let go. excellent read! one note, hope you don't mind, "two lost souls that has" i believe should be "have" and the following "has" as well. "who have tasted".
Thanks for this comment! I've changed the mistakes, thanks for that as well!
sure no problem, had to read again while i was here, really great write!
:)
Sure no problem, had
To read again while i was
Here, really great write!
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