RE: [ORIGINAL POEM] Someday, Somewhere, Somehow

[thiscrazylife]

i can feel the emotion put into this piece. you write a about scenario many have been through and will go through. hopefully all can find the strength to relax and let go. excellent read! one note, hope you don't mind, "two lost souls that has" i believe should be "have" and the following "has" as well. "who have tasted".

Comments

[glittergirl]

Thanks for this comment! I've changed the mistakes, thanks for that as well!

[thiscrazylife]

sure no problem, had to read again while i was here, really great write!

[glittergirl]

:)

[haikubot]

Sure no problem, had
To read again while i was
Here, really great write!

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