Nothing?

in #poetry6 years ago

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A wretched corpse
A rotten mind
12 times wasted
A coin each time

A fruitless tree
Is standing still
To uproot itself
From a sacred hill

A flawless theme, is never real
Until it is
Then flaws appear

Life is pain
Life is worry,
the apprehension that you're not sorry

When things were simple
When ways were plain...
Society seemed... So much more sane

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A brilliantly written piece, you definitely had me wrapped up in the room and the fact that you were able to maintain the perfect rhyme with each of the Four and 3 line stanzas and perfectly tells the sad story that comes with life and how it seems it all boils down to one thing at the end which is of course death is a very beautiful poem and moreso I enjoyed the message is conveyed

Interesting work indeed :) I have a bit of trouble understanding English poetry. Something just does not click with me and I cannot visualize it :(

Great work nevertheless :)

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