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RE: Nothing?

in #poetry6 years ago

A brilliantly written piece, you definitely had me wrapped up in the room and the fact that you were able to maintain the perfect rhyme with each of the Four and 3 line stanzas and perfectly tells the sad story that comes with life and how it seems it all boils down to one thing at the end which is of course death is a very beautiful poem and moreso I enjoyed the message is conveyed