The two parts go perfectly together. This type of narration is very close to my heart; I really enjoy the very descriptive, filled with poetic observations, picture you painted in my mind with your words. I don't know if you ever considered it, but you should look into releasing a book, and in it share your poems and possibly stories, as you hold the potential to write amazing descriptive stories!
I have recently started a poetry server on Discord and would love to invite you in to join. If you wish to read more about why and what the aims of it are, you can read my new post about it here, or join the server directly here.
Once again well done on the poem, and thank you for sharing!
Thank you for your support. I have had a lot of people tell me to publish my creations, But I have no idea where or how to do so... I'll take a look into the discord when I have time :)
You can message me on discord and I can share some knowledge I have on this. I am currently working on a book myself. :)