Untitled pt 2
Finally! That took forever
I've completed what I needed to do
I went to the bank I went to the grocery store
Hell I even managed to get some shoes
It's about the same time
Maybe I should go back to that street
Where I was stopped
Maybe the person is there I should probably greet
A long walk over to Wall berry street
I've done so much walking I might have blisters on my feet
Should've probably worn them in first
I just hope the blisters don't burst
Here's the place
I don't seem to see any familiar faces
I'll chill for an hour
And see if I can see the wilted smudged flower
Excuse me
They are actually here
Finally that wait felt like a year
That's a pretty neat suit
Hey. I hoped I could find you again today
What seemed to problem you enough to stop me in my way?
As you can see
I'm in need
Not sure that I can help
But I guess I can try
What is it you need?
What is the cause for the burn in your eye?
And with that she handed me a note
Spun around and ran like mountain goat
Guess there's nothing I can do
If she can't give me the problem.
Meet me here again
Tomorrow I'll share my pain
By Ethan
2017/09/10
Read both parts. Interesting how your mind came up with such beautiful content yet somehow it couldn't construct the titles! Weird is so cool :D
xD I really have no idea what to say. But it doesn't bother me... A lot of poets had sonnets and stuff which didn't have titles :)
Beautiful thing is... it doesn't bother me too :D
nice poem ,, @xxsenpaixsamaxx i have a cool poem to share with you hope you gonna love it..@mrblu post i resteem his post..i love his content too..just like yours..https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-don-t-touch-me
He send me links quite often. I also enjoy his works :)
I would suggest you put some title on it ^^ It would sound amazing!
I have no idea what to title it as... Like my brain has nothing that would mach it
upvoted
@xxsenpaixsamaxx buddy as always,you have a nice poem..kindly see mine too?
https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-just-call-my-name-and-i-ll-be-there
Will do bud :)
hii dear @xxsenpaixsamaxx, wonderfull poetry u shared and convey the message very diffrent style by choosing poetry. i appreciated you and supported u. resteem, follow.
wonderful poem!
I like these "Series"
Thanks, I enjoy writing them :)
Amazing, It's very nice and you have a sensitive feeling shown in your words
but the title is the only thing you miss
I can't think of anything as a title.
Hi, great your post. I invite you to see my publications
ohhhhhhhhhhhh nice
What a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it :)
Another intriguing poem with suspense. I love these stories in poem form. It stimulates the brain and imagination. I really enjoy these encounters of mystery. Thank-you as always Ethan for your wonderful creative spirit!!!!! :D
nice poem..Upvoted..
@xxsenpaixsamaxx.. i have a poem, hope you can read this my simple poem and hope you like it..Your Upvoted i highly appreciated..
https://steemit.com/poetry/@leslyfay/poetry-3-i-will-love-you-anyways
https://steemit.com/poetry/@leslyfay/poetry-5-in-search-of
https://steemit.com/poetry/@leslyfay/poetry-6-after-the-rain
Awesome. i'm excited to see what will happen next :)
Here's my recent post. Hope you have time to read.
Comments, suggestions, upvotes & resteem will highly appreciated. Thank you!
https://steemit.com/poetry/@athenabree08/appreciate-life
I'll get to it when I can :D
Aweeee. They're so kawaii, both of them. ^^ waiting for the part 3. :) I'm quite curious as to what will they talk about. Very nice poem like always @xxsenpaixsamaxx. :) I'm starting to be a fan of yours haha.
Gonna post it up really soon. :D
Its awesome.l dont find it just a poem....its sensational....the love that steemit has to bind us together is very great....it takes only few people like @tezmel to see the interesting things about such writings.... @cabbagepatch also smell the suspense in this as l do too...even though it wasnt captioned but trust me this poem still comes with all the goodness to make it readable...thanks for the love @xxsenpaixsmaxx ...keep steeming
Thanks for sending love in my direction :D I have no idea what to title it ;)
its useful.caption gives it a good mental image for reading
The two parts go perfectly together. This type of narration is very close to my heart; I really enjoy the very descriptive, filled with poetic observations, picture you painted in my mind with your words. I don't know if you ever considered it, but you should look into releasing a book, and in it share your poems and possibly stories, as you hold the potential to write amazing descriptive stories!
I have recently started a poetry server on Discord and would love to invite you in to join. If you wish to read more about why and what the aims of it are, you can read my new post about it here, or join the server directly here.
Once again well done on the poem, and thank you for sharing!
Thank you for your support. I have had a lot of people tell me to publish my creations, But I have no idea where or how to do so... I'll take a look into the discord when I have time :)
You can message me on discord and I can share some knowledge I have on this. I am currently working on a book myself. :)
Nice poetry
@xxsenpaixsamaxx very informative post have a good day ahead keep upthe good work best wishes