Thank you so much; I'm delighted you enjoyed this! Truth be told, I like the second half the best as well. It took an incredible number of hours to write this so that it flowed well and made sense both ways - I was writing from both ends at the same time.
Well, I do post some, occasionally, but mostly freeverse. It suits me better. https://steemit.com/poetry/@markrmorrisjr/allegiance I can also write a mean dirty lymerick, although, after the Keilor debacle, I guess that skill is not much in demand these days.
Thank you so much; I'm delighted you enjoyed this! Truth be told, I like the second half the best as well. It took an incredible number of hours to write this so that it flowed well and made sense both ways - I was writing from both ends at the same time.
I should give it a shot. People have said my poetry is good, but I do it mostly when I'm overwhelmed by something.
I'd love to read your poetry - let me know if you decide to take the plunge!
Well, I do post some, occasionally, but mostly freeverse. It suits me better. https://steemit.com/poetry/@markrmorrisjr/allegiance I can also write a mean dirty lymerick, although, after the Keilor debacle, I guess that skill is not much in demand these days.