Weekly Poetry Jam - Closet Space (Original Poetry)

in #poetry8 years ago

This week's poetry jam was motivated by the social dynamic of getting too caught up in our own "stuff." Hope you enjoy!

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Closet Space

Making room may be wrong
Because things for ourselves
We love to hoard

Our closet's full, but is it always the case
Room for someone else
There should always be a place

When that time comes along for another
We can open our door without sacrificing our order

A harmonic fit is how the other space should fit
Items in your closet the other should think is legit
When you don't need to clean out your closet to secure a hitch

You have reached an incredible feat
That's when your closet is now complete


Regards,
Mitchell J
Thanks for the pic pixabay

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Nicely Written!

Thank you very much! Some nice pieces in your posts, upped.

nice writting!!

Great poem but I don´t agree :) I would say your closet is always complete. :)

I dunno who started a poetry jam, but I'm in. I haven't felt inspired to write a good poem for steemit in a minute either so good luck :) https://steemit.com/poetry/@clayboyn/love-defining-the-intangible-weekly-poetry-jam

It's just something I started a few months back. I post a poem once a week thus the title. But it certainly can become a thing, that would be cool.

:) It got me inspired to write a poem just from the title. I say let's do it. I'll donate some steem if we want to get a pool going.