I love the visual nature of the descriptive imagery in this poem. It is disquieting
You
a breath
and words
liquid that stains
you
permeate the humus
You
seep in
and are contrast
while enticing - it is this dark beauty which held me spell bound. And the spoken word videos use of colour, light and sound just drives that atmosphere home.
Really nice mamadini!
Thank you kindly @raj808.
I very much appreciate your taking the time to listen and leave these beautiful words. :)